Speed of Flight
Dancing the Code
|ISBN#||0 426 20441 7|
|Continuity||Between Planet of the Daleks
The Green Death
|Synopsis: When the Doctor invents a machine to predict the future, he sees the death of himself and Jo at the hands of the Brigadier. Deciding that separating is the best way to avoid this fate, Jo is sent on assignment to Africa where she discovers a deadly threat is hiding in the desert.|
Break Dancing the Code, a disco fandango of a great book by Matt Haasch 11/6/00
I finally got it in the mail, and I began to read, despite I was still in the midst of Matrix. It was a book I read throughout a week misspent in school learning nothing applicable. I probably learned more, and sure was more entertained by this book. Reasons to love the crap out of it till the binding looks awful:
Overall -- read this one it's good, except for a couple gratuitous references to have the urge to urinate. (I could never imagine a woman saying "I have to piss") A definite plus and thing to look out for is the Doctor flying a jet, with the Brig in the seat behind. Wonderful stuff!
A Review by Stuart Gutteridge 23/8/00
One of the better MAs, given that the only previous novel to feature the Third Doctor was The Ghosts Of N-Space and that itself was a novelisation of a radio play.
PLOT: Interesting yet simple and engaging enough to hold the readers attention throughout. The number of deaths however does seem to contradict what Paul Leonard is trying to get across however.
THE DOCTOR: Perfectly Pertwee, complete with him trying out various vehicles.
COMPANION: Jo here is definitely more grown up, obviously preparing her for her departure in The Green Death; certainly refreshing.
OTHERS: UNIT are really the only other characters that stand out, certainly the Brigadier, who is the initial thrust of the storyline.
VILLAINS: Well, said villains are in fact an alien race of insects, attacking Kebiria (the desert to you and me). The alien Xarax are at least believable, although they don`t carry the same weight as the Venusians in Leonard`s previous Venusian Lullaby.
OVERALL: For the refreshing change of setting, characterisation (especially Jo) and for being a particularly enjoyable novel Dancing The Code gets a deserved 8/10.
A Review by Finn Clark 4/4/05
Does almost nothing for me, I'm afraid. It's not a bad book, but little about it had survived in my memory from the first time I read it. Paul Leonard is clearly fond of the UNIT family, but I've always felt that his two Pertwee MAs are his weakest books.
The biggest problem with Dancing the Code is its villains. The Xarax are faceless. They don't speak, think or show any personality or motivation. Our heroes might as well be fighting accelerated global warming or a space plague. The result is a dry, one-sided story with rather hollow action scenes. For a while we have terrorists and other such characters to keep our interest alive, but by the end it's all degenerated into imminent nuclear strikes, lots of helicopters and the Doctor doing something clever with biotech. Sadly technobabble is still technobabble, even if it's done with clever honey instead of nanomachines.
There's the Arabian setting, with terrorists and police brutality. What with this and Interference, if I was an Arab I might be getting touchy. It's distinctive and scary, yes, but it's also too Mortimoresque for its own good. Paul Leonard has often been influenced by his friend and fellow writer (and I generally like both of their work), but this is too much. People die, then other people die, then in case we hadn't got the message some more people die. Frankly it's monotonous. It kills the tension. You can't put emotional investment into the characters if you know it's all going to end in senseless death.
The regulars didn't work for me. The book poses a central dilemma... "could the Brigadier murder the Doctor and Jo?", but then doesn't really do anything with it. Of course he could! It's his job! In the end this issue is resolved with the cop-out we saw coming a mile away, when there's still another third of the book to go. The Doctor takes ages to get involved, but I thought Jo in particular never quite clicked. It's a difficulty that's peculiar to Doctor Who novelists... taking a paper-thin character from the TV show, memorable mostly for a pretty face and a charming performance, and then trying to make them work on the page. Paul Leonard went on to use Jo Grant in three novels (Dancing the Code, Speed of Flight and Genocide) and I didn't buy her in any of them.
Jo Grant lists some of the aliens she's met on p61, the author rather pathetically adding a few invented names so as not to straitjacket future novelists. However I don't think anyone to date has felt the need to create aliens called Methaji or Hoveet for the sake of tying into a throwaway mention in a mostly forgotten MA... by now I'd be surprised if anyone ever did.
At the end of the day, this isn't a bad book. Paul Leonard is a fine writer and he's obviously still trying, but for me there's just too much to distance me from the action. The personality-less alien menace, the never-ending random death, the flat regulars... even the incidental characters couldn't save it, partly because too many of 'em are grim killers and partly because you know they're all doomed anyway. I give this book credit for a wholehearted portrayal of Middle Eastern brutality and horror, but when it comes to the Whoish elements there's not much I'd recommend.
A Review by Brian May 24/4/06
In Dancing the Code, Paul Leonard takes the Mawdryn Undead line, making the 1970s the contemporary setting for the third Doctor/UNIT era. To his credit, he has capably recreated the feel of the decade. The novel is part political thriller, featuring international tensions between the Arab world and the west, civil war, celebrity terrorists and the shadow of nuclear annihilation (and, three decades on, everything old is new again!) And look at UNIT: it's finally an international body with all the clout and credibility such an organisation deserves; on screen The Claws of Axos and to a lesser extent The Ambassadors of Death were the only Pertwee stories that gave UNIT this scope.
UNIT is also done another long overdue favour. It's personalised. The troops are no longer the faceless cannon fodder extras so casually zapped out of existence by various alien marauders. They're flesh and blood, real people with loved ones, whose individual deaths are rightly treated as tragic. Anton Devereaux left behind a wife and two children; Mike Yates is relieved he doesn't have to inform them of his death. But it probably will be down to him to tell Jenny, Private John Shoregood's partner, that he won't be coming home. So too all the other families: those of Sergeant Dave Green, Barry Ryman, Pepworth, Morgan, Richard Moore and Tim Witchell. The Brigadier knows the number of the UNIT morgue off by heart and it disturbs him. UNIT has never been so human.
Our "UNIT family", thankfully minus the Master, are depicted extremely well. Yates is great: when he's in his office, he actually has work to do. And when he's in the field, he's a soldier, seeing action and getting his hands dirty, as he did in much of season 8 and practically never afterwards. Benton gets to carry a good chase/action moment towards the end, and Jo is capable, resourceful and intelligent, very much as she was in The Mind of Evil. The Doctor and Brigadier are by far the best. Their bickering is great, as is the Doctor's constant flouting of authority, delightfully revisited during the flight in the Superhawk; the dialogue between the two is rich and humorous. We even see a deeper, more introspective side to Lethbridge-Stewart as he ponders the implications of the Prognosticator's image of his shooting the Doctor and Jo.
The rest of the characters aren't that special, mainly because few of them are fleshed out properly. When they are, in the case of Catriona, they don't succeed for being too uninteresting. Conversely the potentially interesting ones, such as Vincent, the Sakir and his son Tahir, aren't given much examination or depth, and so proper characterisation suffers. But Leonard has a great grasp of drama. As with the UNIT soldiers, individual deaths, even those of unsympathetic and antagonistic characters like Vincent, Benari and Catriona's prison guard, are each a pointless waste of life. The bombing of Free Giltea is the dramatic centrepiece of the book, and the resulting carnage as witnessed by Jo is very sobering indeed. There's also some breath-bating action, the jailbreak in particular.
Of course there's an alien threat present, or this wouldn't be Doctor Who: the Xarax. They're well conceived, but not spectacular and not really that memorable. It's when describing them and their habitat that Leonard's normally high standard of writing suffers. Moments inside the interior of their base are often stilted and confusing. The pace also drags in the middle sections, when all the different parties are making their way across various strips of desert. While the fictitious country is quite effectively realised overall, here it lacks a sense of scale. You're not sure how far, or near, everyone is from each other.
I also feel that the positioning of the story - between Planet of the Daleks and The Green Death - isn't the best. It would have worked much better during the Doctor's exile. All the journeys to and from Kebiria are by plane. Had this been pre-Three Doctors it would have been the only fast way to travel. In that case the author wouldn;t have had to contrive the rather silly moment on p.71 that puts the TARDIS out of action. It would also have given more edge to the Prognosticator situation. The Doctor reasons the prediction won't be fulfilled if he and Jo separate; but without the option of simply getting in the TARDIS and flying away, the scenario could have had added tension. But on the other hand this is offset by a couple of lovely moments that benefit from its placing: a quite touching bit of eavesdropping on Jo as she reflects on her time with the Doctor. (p.41) Even with the writer's benefit of hindsight, it still makes the foreshadowing of The Green Death very poignant. And on pp.20-21 we learn of the apprehension felt by the Brigadier and Mike that the Doctor will soon leave for good.
But at the end of the day, Dancing the Code is a decent read: a great use of the regulars and UNIT with a good period feel. The so-so alien race and the sub-par guest characters don't spoil things too much. The Prognosticator subplot is interesting, but when we learn the Xarax can replicate people, it's obvious the Brigadier will shoot the copies (compare this with the Blake's 7 episode Redemption). But the novel is certainly worth a look.
And I love the title! It's incorporated into the story like a Baker & Martin catchphrase. I'm not sure exactly what it means, but to quote Paul Cornell, it sounds way cool. 7.5/10